Tuesday 28 May 2019

Moment in time.

This is my moment in time, our learning intention was to be in the moment and write the perspective of one of the maori men or sailors on captain cooks ship the endeavor and possible one of the surroundings.
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  1. Anonymous21 June 2019 at 12:22

    Kia Ora Maxwell, My name is Neve I go to St Patrick's school Greymouth I like the imagination in your story it hooked me in and made me want to read more, I also liked how you made it sound quite realistic good job :)
    -Neve

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